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Task 7: Present & Evaluate

This is my presentation video



In this video I talked about my chosen piece from my comic and explained what it is about after the presentation I was asked questions about my story and my drawings the questions helped me think about what I could improve one.In the picture there really was no text so I could of added text to explain it more and maybe people would understand what my character can do.



This trailer of Sky High film from 2005 it is a rough story my comic strip was based off.Within this film a kid goes to a high school for people with superpowers this is what my idea came from.I also got the idea for the bus from this film.
 
I chose superman & the flash because of my powers what I had in my comic the superheroes have the same powers.Superman is one of the greatest and well known heroes so i wanted to have the same powers to look good.

http://img05.deviantart.net/13d1/i/2014/261/4/a/earth_2_superman__bourassa_style__by_owc478-d74ivzp.png

https://pmcdeadline2.files.wordpress.com/2013/07/flash__130730072050.jpeg

Task 6: Outcome

This is what my outcome looks like I have chose the second storyboard to further enhance it and make it more detailed and clearer to understand in this comic strip.
The first image consists of the bus driving away from the main character in the story therefore he would have to chase after it in order to get to the school which is Powers High school.
The second image shows the bus driving down the road and my main character chasing after it with his super speed powers, however not managing to reach the school bus.
The third image demonstrates the bus getting ready for take off and Kieran the main character managed to jump of the clift and grab ahold of the school bus mid-air which is shown within the third image. He then opens the door leading to the final photo of my storyboard which shows him arriving at Powers High.

Task 5: Further Development of storyboard

Task 4: Development of a storyboard

Task 3: Generating visual ideas & artwork for your story

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My ideas for my story I thought of the flash to show of the powers.withing in the comics the flash has super speed and this is similar to my character within my story .

http://static.comicvine.com/uploads/original/11111/111113523/3605753-1936874063-31646.png
Also my ideas co inside with superman and his super strength and flight.
http://trailers.apple.com/trailers/disney/sky_high/images/index-mainpic.jpg
Sky high is the back story of my mine this is where I became of the idea.


Pictures the refer to my storyboard:
this first image is the couch out of my room which is shown in my first scene images i took this picture because it was an  sight in the comic strip.

This second image is a picture of my bathroom which in the comic strip is shown when me as a character is taking a shower.

 The third image is a picture of my bed in the first image in the comic strip you can see me in a bed this is what the picture is based off .all of these images are from the first scene in the comic.

Task 2: Writing your story

My story
the dream
Flying through the air over the losing flight falling into a radiation pit and suddenly awaking
waking up.
The alarm sets off at  ''BUZZ'' ''BUZZ'' Kieran reaches out knocking his lamp of the desk. It smashes breaking it into 1 million pieces whilst he stumbled out of bed.
Suddenly looking at my phone 8:55 and the broken alarm clock, super speeding to the shower, washed in seconds, clothed on and out of the door. Running with super speed to catch the bus for powers high. Having only missed the bus by seconds, Kieran had to find another way to school unable to fly with the school being on another planet under the oxygen dome located left from earth 616. Kieran watches the bus fly away. Kieran, running at super speed leaps of the cliff grappling onto the bus as it leaves the atmosphere. Opening the back door of the bus and climbed in.''Mr Anderson where have you been strap in. The flying school bus engages its rockets and flew out of atmosphere before inflating a force Field with oxygen.

After a flight to the power high a large podium based just out of Earth's orbit power high is a sophisticated mutant high school equipped to handle any obstacle .
After arriving at Powers High kieran was greeted by the principle he exclaimed " after potentially nearly harming everyone on the bus you have a to be placed in seclusion all day" Kieran walks in to exclusion and sits down.
Meanwhile the wielder for the new school bus door is working on fixing it. Suddenly a black shadow attacks him, take the blow torch and that sets a fire causing the the gravity generates to malfunction alarms go of in the school students run in a panic.
Kieran sat in seclusion cant get out of the room because the door is locked. The room has a detoxing shield so your power does not work in it. Kieran tries to open the door but it is sealed shut through the glass he can see people running in a panic. The pupils with flight are flying away, teleportation zapping away everyone in a panic. Suddenly the principle opens the door for kieran setting him free. Kieran had to do something maybe he could stop the school from falling if only he could get under it but he can not fly he thought to himself would he be willing to risk his life to save everyone........to be continued